“Tell me something sweet, before i doze off.” She ordered innocently.
“Sweetheart, I’m tired and sleepy. You are sweet! you know that. What else can be sweeter?” I reassured.
No! Look at me. I’m sleepy, sleepy and (Errrmmmm) sleepy. I have three things to suffer, you have two. Are you going to say something or should I doze off?” She blackmailed.
I had to agree with her THREE THINGS, along with THE FOUR and a few more. I had a bad day, which was full of pleasant failures. She too had a bad day but it was full of a thousand sweet miseries . I had run out of peace and was unable to afford a one night’s sleep. Afraid that She’ll really doze off, If i said something sweet,
I said,
“Emmm, Okay. Look into my eyes. I’ll look into yours. Don’t say anything, I won’t either. We ‘ll listen to the silence between us until we fall asleep.”
I knew that the silence would storm a few of our passions, and a lot of our dreams; Some fake and Phony things and a few sweet lies. Above all, it will talk about her presence, and mine.
Instead of looking, she plunged her eyes into mine and blinked…
awwww… its small moments like these that make your heart go mmmmmmmm
hey thanks for the comment! and i really like the way you right, it’s very expressive and has that touch of true-to-life obscurity that i think most people lack, keep up the good work!
@Compulsivewriter
Thanks… I like the way you comment =)
@ MrStone
Thanks dude. Most of the people have it, they don’t just realize. We all have a lot of things, we don’t just realize.
I used the wrong version of the word write, I’m very sorry, it won’t happen again.
@ Misterstone, 🙂
hey…wow thats really sweet…
and you write really well…
wish i could write like that… =(
Very pure moments, silence speaking out the words deep in heart…and eyes exploring the strengths of bond, trust and never ending relation
Aaah, thats a sweet tale 🙂
i love this one, every time i visit your blog i read this one first….
its reallyy nice..i feel it shows da deep relation dey share…its nt jus words or selfishness 2 hav sum1 so dat u can liv in dis world….nd yaa…d way u write givs a beautiful touch 2 sumthing which is as normal as lukin in2 sum1s eyez..dts artistic
@Scorpio=rok
Thank you for your kind appreciation. But who are you? you didn’t provide any link. Btw, you sound familiar.
I don’t have words to describe the beauty of the whole scenario. Its lovely!
very nice post. I like it a lot 🙂
@ Rainbow,
Thank you. I’m glad that you liked it. 🙂
Beautiful Harun!Makes u swoon really…u r one dangerous man:)
Keep up the good work!